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Landing page top for my crypto tax tool, $49 a year
# Crypto taxes, sorted for $49 a year. One tool for the crypto part of your tax return. $49 covers the whole year, however many trades you made. **Get started for $49**
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here's the email our front desk wrote to send to patients we haven't seen in 6+ months. i think it's too stiff and too long. we're a physical therapy clinic in Sacramento, 2 locations. Dear Valued Patient, We hope this message finds you well. It has been some time since your last visit to our clinic. We would like to ...
**Subject:** Free 20-minute movement screen, this month only **Preheader:** For patients we haven't seen in a while. Either Sacramento location, October only. Hi [First Name], It's been a while. If something's tightened up again, or you've just been meaning to check in, October is the month to do it. Returning patie...
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For my client, a boutique strength gym opening its second location in Denver (Highlands) in January. Deliverable: landing page hero for the pre-opening founders' membership page. Components: headline (max 10 words), subhead (max 25 words), 3 proof/benefit bullets, primary CTA, secondary text link. Audience: adults 28...
**Headline option 1 — Founders' membership** Founders' memberships open now. Highlands doors open in January. **Headline option 2 — Coaching** A strength coach who knows your name and your lifts. **Subhead** Our second location opens in the Highlands in January. Three years, about 400 members and a 4.9 from 210 revie...
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google ads for our animal rescue in Ohio, we need monthly donors. searchers are solution aware already so just why us. no sad dying puppies copy pls. 5 headlines, 2 descriptions
### Headlines 1. Monthly Gifts, Kept in Ohio 2. Become a Monthly Donor 3. Set It Once. Help Every Month. 4. Ohio Animals. Ohio Donors. 5. Give Monthly to a Local Rescue ### Descriptions 1. Your monthly gift goes to animals here in Ohio. Set it up once. Become a monthly donor. 2. Monthly giving lets the rescue plan, no...
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linkedin post about my pricing course
Most prices get set like this: look at what a competitor charges, go a bit under, hope. Then the hope part gets expensive. Under-charge and every job needs to be shorter, every client needs to be easier, and you need more of them just to stand still. "Just raise it" isn't the fix either. A price is three questions, a...
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Google ad for my CV proofreading service, £25, you get comments back as a pdf within 2 working days
**Headlines** 1. CV Proofreading, £25 2. CV Proofread in 2 Working Days 3. Comments Back as a PDF 4. Fix the Typos Before You Apply 5. Flat £25 per CV 6. Fresh Eyes on Your CV 7. Send Your CV, Get Notes Back 8. Applying This Week? 9. Every Typo Marked Up for £25 10. Order CV Proofreading Now **Descriptions** 1. Send y...
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Google ad for my bookkeeping, dont mention taxes or payroll
**Headlines** - Bookkeeping Service - Bookkeeping for Your Business - Books Behind? Get Caught Up - Bookkeeping Done for You - Your Books, Kept Current - Know What You Made This Month - Stop Doing Your Own Books - Hand Off Your Bookkeeping - Clean Books, No Late Nights - Bookkeeper for Your Business - Get a Bookkeeping...
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Search ads for our villa gutter and roof drain cleaning service in Dubai (Arabian Ranches, Springs, Meadows, Jumeirah Park mainly). We clear the gutters and roof outlets, flush the downpipes and take the debris away. AED 450 for a single-storey villa up to about 45 metres of gutter, bigger villas get a quote. Timing: r...
### Headlines 1. Gutter Cleaning Dubai 2. Roof Drain Blocked? 3. Clear It Before November Rain 4. AED 450 Single-Storey Villa 5. Arabian Ranches & Springs 6. Meadows & Jumeirah Park 7. Gutters, Outlets & Downpipes 8. Get A Quote On WhatsApp ### Descriptions 1. Gutters and roof outlets cleared, downpipes flushed, debri...
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temp staffing website page, Amsterdam
# Someone's off sick, an order just doubled, or a project has an end date. You need people in Amsterdam this week, not a hiring process. Temporary staff for Amsterdam workplaces. Tell us the role, how many people and when; we come back with what we can do. **Send my staffing request** Tell us what you know. Flag what...
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Insta/facebook ad for our sparkling tea gift trio - 3 x 750ml bottles, oolong, jasmine white and a smoked black tea, in a gift box with a little food pairing card. AED 495 delivered anywhere in the UAE. Its for people hosting dinners who want something nice on the table that isnt alcohol, we get a lot of orders for ift...
**Primary text** The iftar menu is sorted. What's going in the glasses? Three sparkling teas that stand up to real food: a smoked black for the heavier plates, a jasmine white for the lighter ones, and an oolong for everything in between. 750ml each, boxed, with a pairing card so you know which bottle to open with whi...
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can you fix this product page copy for our sleep-time tea, the intern wrote it and its full of stuff we can't say. keep the facts, lose the medical claims, make it sound like a nice tea not a pharmacy WIND DOWN NIGHTTIME TEA Struggling with insomnia? This tea cures sleeplessness naturally! Our clinically proven blend ...
# Wind Down Nighttime Tea The last cup of the day, made for the half hour before bed. Chamomile, valerian root, lemon balm and lavender: four organic herbs, no caffeine, in a blend that tastes like the evening slowing down. - 20 biodegradable tea bags - Caffeine free - Organic ingredients - Steep 5–7 minutes, best e...
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EOFY discount email for my Melbourne design agency
**Subject:** The design job you've been carrying into next financial year **Preheader:** Our EOFY discount is on. Reply with the brief before the year closes. Hi [first name], There's a design project on your list that's been there since last EOFY. The website. The pitch deck. The brand that still looks like the firs...
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Instagram caption (plus a shorter version for Stories) for our maths mentoring programme. Audience is parents of Year 10–12 students in London and the South East, mostly heading towards GCSE and A-level maths. - 16 weeks, online - two one-to-one 60-minute lessons per week - weekly written update to parents - £5,400 in...
### Instagram caption Your child says "I get it in class." Then the homework goes quiet. That's usually where a mentor helps: someone who knows exactly where they got stuck last week and picks up from there. Our 16-week online maths mentoring programme, for Year 10–12 students in London and the South East: • Two on...
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instagram caption for our walnut record cabinet, small furniture workshop in Dubai. AED 8,800, free delivery in Dubai and Abu Dhabi. buyers are vinyl people who want furniture not a shelf... link in bio, under 100 words, max 5 hashtags
You spent years on the collection. It's sitting on a shelf that took ten minutes to assemble. This is the walnut record cabinet, built in our small workshop in Dubai. Furniture first, record storage second. The kind of piece the rest of the room gets arranged around. AED 8,800. Free delivery in Dubai and Abu Dhabi. ...
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facebook/insta ad for my IT support company in Nottingham, we look after small businesses (5-30 staff), dentists, solicitors, accountants. helpdesk, backups, we come out if needed. everyones just had a nightmare over christmas with something breaking and nobody answering so hit that... we answer within 3 rings, thats o...
**Primary text** Something broke over Christmas and nobody picked up. That's the call we answer within 3 rings. Helpdesk, backups, and someone in the van on the way if it can't be fixed remotely. We look after Nottingham businesses with 5–30 staff: dental practices, solicitors, accountants, the ones where a dead syst...
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Landing page hero for our fragrance-free body lotion, 250ml pump, S$32. Traffic is coming from a Meta retargeting campaign so these people have already seen the product once. Everyday use after showering is the angle: humid weather, nobody wants anything heavy or scented. Need a headline (under 8 words), a subhead, and...
### Headline variations 1. Still humid. Still fragrance-free. S$32. 2. After the shower, nothing heavy, nothing scented. 3. The fragrance-free lotion you looked at. S$32. ### Subhead Fragrance-free body lotion for every day after the shower, in humid weather. 250ml pump, S$32. ### CTA options - **A:** Shop now - **B:...
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Product page for our contract renewal software. Keeps vendor contracts, deadlines and who owns each one in one place, sends approvals to finance. $84k a year
# Every vendor contract, its renewal date and its owner, on one screen. Approvals go straight to finance. The renewal you find out about after it auto-renewed is the expensive one. Keep every vendor contract, its deadline and the person responsible for it in one place, and send the approval to finance from the same sc...
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Google Ads for our large glass greenhouse, 3.6 x 4.8 m, aluminium frame, tempered glass, automatic roof vents, permanent installation. €22,500 incl. delivery and installation within 100 km of our showroom near Utrecht. Conversion is a free site assessment. We get clicks from people looking at €500 polytunnels, so put t...
### Headlines 1. €22,500 Glass Greenhouse 2. 3.6 x 4.8 m Glass Greenhouse 3. Delivered & Installed For You 4. Tempered Glass, Alu Frame 5. Automatic Roof Vents Fitted 6. Permanent, Not A Polytunnel 7. Free Site Assessment 8. Book A Free Site Assessment ### Descriptions 1. €22,500 incl. delivery and installation within...
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Google search ads for a multi-entity treasury platform. We're Dubai based, selling across the GCC. One place for bank balances across all entities, cash forecasts and intercompany funding requests. Targeting group treasurers and treasury directors at holding companies with 10-50 subsidiaries. Goal is demo bookings; the...
### Headlines 1. Multi-Entity Treasury Platform 2. Treasury Software for Groups 3. For Groups of 10–50 Entities 4. Built for Group Treasurers 5. Every Entity's Bank Balance 6. Group-Wide Cash Forecasts 7. Intercompany Funding Requests 8. One Screen for All Entities 9. Book a Treasury Demo 10. Enterprise Treasury Softwa...
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trial ending email for our interior designer app (measurements, photos, client decisions in one project). people with 3 days left. short. we DONT charge automatically or delete their stuff, dont imply that
**Subject:** 3 days left on your trial (your projects aren't going anywhere) **Preheader:** Pick a plan to keep measurements, photos and client decisions in one place. Hi [first name], Your trial ends in 3 days. Every measurement, photo and client decision you've added is still sitting in one project, and it stays t...
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Ok so I own a small hair salon in Tucson, 3 chairs, we just brought on a stylist who does balayage and lived-in color and her book is basically empty for October. Want a facebook/instagram ad to fill it. Dont say "transformation" or do any before and after type stuff, we've had people show up expecting miracles
**Primary text** Tucson: October balayage openings at a 3-chair salon, with a stylist who does lived-in colour that grows out softly instead of in a line. Our newest stylist specialises in balayage and lived-in colour and has October dates open. Message us with a photo of your hair now and what you're after, and she'l...
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Instagram post for our agency, 3 agents in Valencia, about our free 'first call': a 30 min video call walking people through what buying in Spain actually involves before they look at listings. No obligation. Goal is DMs and calls booked. 3 versions: one straightforward, one opening with a question, one short and punch...
### 1. Straightforward Before you save another Valencia listing, spend 30 minutes finding out what buying in Spain actually involves. That's our free first call: a 30-minute video call with one of our 3 agents, walking you through the steps between "I like this flat" and getting the keys. What happens in what order, ...
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ok that headline is too clever, nobody knows what 'money clarity' means. plainer. its a cash tracker, upload your bank csv, $8/mo. keep both buttons (paid signup + waitlist), still havent picked
# See where your cash went. Upload your bank CSV. A cash tracker for people who'd rather not hand over a bank login. Upload the CSV your bank already gives you. $8/month. **[Sign up — $8/month]** **[Join the waitlist]** — Note: I don't have the earlier draft, so this is rebuilt from what's in your message.
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Google ad for our sunday roast. Pub in sheffield, £16.50, kids eat free, book online
**Headlines** - Sunday Roast In Sheffield - £16.50 Sunday Roast - Kids Eat Free On Sundays - Book Your Sunday Table Online - Sheffield Pub Sunday Lunch - Roast For £16.50, Kids Free - Family Sunday Lunch Sheffield - Reserve Your Roast Online - Sunday Roast, Kids Eat Free - Sunday Roast Pub, Sheffield **Descriptions** ...
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Search ads for our fractions course for 9-11 year olds. 12 short videos plus printable worksheets and answer keys, kids work through it on their own. Launch price is €8, but I still need to confirm whether that's per month or lifetime access, so either give me two versions of the descriptions or leave the term out enti...
### Headlines 1. Fractions Help for Kids 2. Fractions Worksheets Grade 4 3. 12 Short Videos, €8 4. Fractions Course, Ages 9-11 5. Printable Worksheets + Keys 6. They Work Through It Alone 7. €8 Launch Price 8. Get the 12-Video Course ### Descriptions 1. 12 short videos, printable worksheets and answer keys for ages 9-...
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LinkedIn post from our founder's account announcing a fixed-scope engagement. 1. The engagement: a six-week payables control review. We map invoice approval across up to four legal entities, sample paid invoices for gaps (duplicate payments, approvals after payment), then hand the CFO a prioritised fix list. 2. Who it...
### Version 1: Duplicate payments The duplicate payments I find are rarely dramatic. It's the same invoice, sent twice, approved by two people who each thought they were the only one. That's what a six-week payables control review is for. We map how invoices get approved across up to four legal entities, sample paid ...
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Hero copy for an expense tracking app built for freelance designers. Upload your bank CSV, it sorts expenses into categories, shows monthly income vs spend, deliberately simple. Traffic will be cold from a design newsletter sponsorship so assume they've never heard of us. Want headline + subhead + 3 short bullets. We'r...
## Direction 1: Not dreading tax time ### Come tax time, every expense is already in a category. You uploaded a CSV once a month; that was the work. Expense tracking for freelance designers. Upload your bank CSV, it sorts the expenses into categories and shows you monthly income against spend. That's all it does, on p...
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ok so i run a small cleaning company, just me and one other cleaner, in a mid sized town in ohio. our bread and butter is fortnightly cleans but we keep getting asked for just the kitchen, a one time deep clean, so we're giving it its own page on the website. what it is: one cleaner, roughly 3 hours, we bring everythi...
# Just the kitchen. One of us, about three hours, and we bring everything. You don't want a fortnightly cleaner. You want the kitchen sorted once: the moving-out kitchen, the after-the-party kitchen, the "it's been a long month with the kids" kitchen. That's this. **Book my kitchen clean** One cleaner, roughly three ...
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Linkedin ad for our treasury software. Bank balances, cash forecasts and payment approvals in one place for groups with lots of entities. They know they need a system, theyre solution aware, its about why us. Starts at £40k a year plus implementation. Want demo bookings. One ad, primary text + headline
**Primary text** Twelve entities, twelve bank portals, one spreadsheet holding the cash position together until Thursday. You already know you need a treasury system. The question is which one. Ours puts bank balances, cash forecasts and payment approvals in one place, built for groups with lots of entities. Your grou...
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This is going to sound like a very small thing to write a whole ad about and it is. We make a silicone spoon rest. It folds flat. Moss green. 4 inches. That's the product. $9 plus $3 shipping, sells on our own site and Etsy. Background: my wife and I make kitchen stuff out of our garage in Sacramento, mostly as a side...
**Primary text** "Finally something that doesn't take up the whole counter." That's the review we get most, from people cooking in studios and first apartments. It's a 4-inch silicone spoon rest that folds flat and lives in a drawer between meals. Moss green, so it looks fine when it does stay out. About 2,100 sold...
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Paid social brief — laundry care label app 1. Product: iOS/Android app. Photograph a garment's care label, the app reads the symbols and saves plain-English washing instructions per garment. Users can search their wardrobe by questions like 'can this go in the dryer'. 2. Offer: $1.99/month after a 7-day free trial. Th...
**Primary text — short (max 125 characters)** Holding the good sweater in front of the machine, guessing? Scan the label. Plain-English washing instructions. **Primary text — longer alternative** You're in front of the machine with the good sweater. The label says △ ▢ ◯. You say "probably fine." The last sweater said ...
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Facebook post for my physical therapy clinic in Cedar Rapids, we now do same week appointments for back pain
Back pain this week? You can be seen this week. Our Cedar Rapids physical therapy clinic now offers same-week appointments for back pain, so you're not waiting on the couch while it decides whether to get better on its own. Message us or call today, and we'll find you a slot this week.
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Product page for a crypto tax-reporting tool. Positioning is boring on purpose: it reads exchange CSV exports and public wallet addresses, reconciles transfers between your own wallets so they aren't double-counted, and produces a capital gains report plus the standard tax forms for the US, UK and Australia. Nothing is...
# Three exchanges, two wallets, one spreadsheet that no longer reconciles. Import your exchange CSV exports, add your public wallet addresses, and the tool matches the transfers between your own wallets so the same assets aren't counted twice. Out the other end: your tax report and the standard forms for the US, UK or...
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Win-back email for people who added something to cart in the last 60 days and didn't check out. We make solid oak side tables and small shelving in Vermont, pieces run $220–$480. Not a "you forgot something!!" email, craftsmanship not urgency. Discount still open: 10% off or free shipping, write it so I can swap either...
### Subject lines 1. The oak piece you were looking at, with [10% off / free shipping] 2. Still thinking about that side table? 3. Solid oak takes a while to decide on. That's fair. **Preheader:** [10% off / Free shipping] is still on your cart. No rush from our end. Hi [First name], You added one of our pieces to y...
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This is the email I sent our list in August, 2 replies out of 300. Can you redo it so people actually book? Subject: Bin Cleaning Special Hi neighbor! Our company is pleased to offer professional wheelie bin cleaning services. For only $12 we will clean the inside and outside of one empty bin. This offer includes all ...
**Subject:** Your bin, cleaned inside and out for $12 **Preheader:** Reply CLEAN with your street and bin day. Book by September 30. Hi [First name], Quick one. The truck empties your bin, but it doesn't clean it, and by August it smells like something died in there. I'll clean the inside and outside of one empty bi...
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instagram post, bakery, new cinnamon rolls
New on the counter: cinnamon rolls. Come in, get one while it's still warm, and tell us whether we should keep making them.
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Context: I'm the founder, we're 4 people, product is a client onboarding workspace for creative agencies. Intake forms, file requests, task owners, approvals, all in one place, and the key thing is the client side - clients get a browser link, upload files, approve stuff, no account, no password reset emails, none of t...
**Subject:** Your clients never log in. That's the whole demo. **Preheader:** One browser link for files and approvals. No account, no password reset emails. Hi {{first_name}}, You grabbed our onboarding checklist template last quarter. One question about the part after the checklist: how many hours this week went to...
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Win-back email for our carpet cleaning business in Munich, for customers who booked once and haven't come back in 12+ months. Pitch is a 3-room clean (vacuum, hot water extraction, spot treatment) for October slots, they reply with their street and preferred weekday. Friendly, zero pressure, they know us so skip the in...
### Subject lines 1. October carpet slots, want one? 2. Your carpets, a year on 3. 3 rooms, one October visit ### Body Hi [First name], It's been over a year since we last cleaned your carpets. If they're due, we're filling October slots now for a 3-room clean: full vacuum, hot water extraction, and spot treatment on...
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Service page for a nail salon in Austin - the page is for our signature gel manicure, which is the booking we want to grow. Facts: - Gel manicure with cuticle care, shaping, base/color/top coat, 60 minutes - Soak-free removal add-on for a previous gel set - Booking online, 24-hour cancellation policy Audience: women ...
# Switching salons? Your next gel set, done properly in 60 minutes, South Austin. You already know what a good gel manicure looks like. This is the one to compare it to: cuticle care, shaping, base, colour and top coat, 60 minutes, booked online. **[Book online]** Add soak-free removal at checkout if you're arriving ...
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Google ads, SAT tutoring, $75/hour
### Headlines 1. SAT Tutoring, $75/Hour 2. SAT Tutor for $75 an Hour 3. 1-on-1 SAT Tutoring 4. Stuck on SAT Math? Book 1 Hr 5. Raise Your SAT Confidence 6. SAT Prep Tutoring Online 7. Book Your First SAT Session 8. Private SAT Tutor, $75/Hr 9. Test Date Coming? Start Now 10. SAT Reading & Math Help ### Descriptions 1....
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Instagram post for my online sourdough course, its 6 video lessons plus a private group where I answer questions. I'm a home baker in Halifax not a chef, been doing this 5 years and people at the market kept asking so I made the course. Want it to be for people whove tried sourdough and killed their starter lol thats b...
Tried sourdough. Killed the starter. Quietly threw the jar out. That's basically everyone who messages me, so I made the course for you. I'm a home baker in Halifax, not a chef. Five years of sourdough, and enough people at the market asking "how do you do this" that I finally wrote it down. 6 video lessons, plus a ...
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Ok so we're a small strength gym in Tucson, not a big box chain, coaching is included in every session. January is when everyone joins the cheap gyms and we lose people to them. Want a facebook/insta ad for our 'foundations' 6 week program, 3 sessions a week, max 8 people per group, starts jan 12. Mostly people 35-55 w...
**Primary text** 24 spots. A coach in every session. Starts January 12. If you've stood at the edge of the free-weight area and gone back to the treadmill, Foundations is for you. It's 6 weeks at our small strength gym in Tucson: 3 coached sessions a week, 18 in total, in a group of no more than 8. A keycard gym han...
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sourdough subscription post is too long, cut it down, lose the word artisan
Sourdough on repeat. Subscribe once and your loaf is spoken for, every time. Subscribe today. — Note: I don't have the earlier draft, so this is rebuilt from what's in your message.
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Meta ad brief for the client's lean-to greenhouse. Product: 8 ft x 10 ft lean-to greenhouse that attaches to the house wall. Western red cedar frame, twin-wall polycarbonate panels, two manual roof vents, full-width cedar potting bench. Made to order in Oregon, ships in 6–8 weeks. Price: from $9,400 for the kit. Deli...
**Primary text — short (under 125 characters)** Cedar frame, twin-wall panels, full-width potting bench. An 8x10 lean-to, made to order in Oregon. View specs. **Primary text — longer (~250 characters)** Cedar or aluminum? Cedar is the one that's warm under your hands on a March morning. Western red cedar frame, twin-w...
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email selling our printable fractions pack, ages 8-10
**Subject:** Fractions homework tonight? **Preheader:** Print it, sit down, done before dinner's cold. Your kid gets fractions in class at 10am and has forgotten them by the time homework comes out. Not because they can't do it. Because they've done it once. Our printable fractions pack for ages 8–10 gives them the p...
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Here's a review a customer in Nova Scotia left for our 8x10 greenhouse, want to build a sales email around it for our list (people who requested the catalogue this year but haven't bought): "Put it up in May with my brother in law over a weekend. Instructions were fine, the glass panels are heavier than you'd think so...
**Subject:** "Had tomatoes until the end of October" **Preheader:** In Nova Scotia. One customer's 8x10, up in a weekend. C$11,900, delivery quoted for your address. You asked for the catalogue this year, so you've seen the 8x10. Here's what one owner in Nova Scotia said after a season with it: > "Had tomatoes until ...
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Product page for our garage renovation packages. Design-build outfit in the Denver suburbs, this is the high-end offer: custom cabinets, epoxy floor, painted walls, new LED lighting, one project coordinator start to finish. Starts at $24k for garages up to 450 sq ft, final quote after a site assessment. Target is homeo...
# Your two-car garage is the biggest room in the house you never show anyone. From $24,000, it becomes one you do. Custom cabinets, an epoxy floor, painted walls and new LED lighting, done as one project by a Denver-suburbs design-build team. One project coordinator from the site assessment to the last day of install,...
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Post for instagram about our restaurant booking software, is R450 per month, we are launching next month in Cape Town
Cape Town restaurants: R450 a month for a booking system. Launching next month. Taking bookings by phone and WhatsApp between services is a job nobody on the floor has time for. Next month, our restaurant booking software goes live in Cape Town at R450 per month, flat. Running a restaurant here and want in before lau...
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quick one — I run marketing for a medspa with two locations in Scottsdale. We have about 340 people who came in for a free skin consult in the last 6 months and never booked a treatment. Want a re-engagement email. Offer: $150 off a first microneedling series (normally $900 for 3 sessions) if they book by end of month....
### Subject line options 1. You came in. Here's $150 for the next part. 2. Your consult is done. $150 off is waiting. 3. $150 off your first microneedling series, this month only **Preheader:** 3 sessions for $750 instead of $900. Book by the end of the month. **Body:** You already did the hard part. You found the t...
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Meta ad, cold traffic, for a wooden stacking toy we make: 8 rings, beech, water-based non-toxic finish. Audience is parents of 1-3 year olds and grandparents buying gifts. Creative is a 15-sec video of a toddler stacking it (badly). Need 4 variations of primary text (under 100 words each) + 5 headlines. Angle: no batte...
## Primary text **1.** No music. No flashing. No "please, not that song again." Just 8 beech rings, a toddler, and a stack that mostly falls over. That's the whole show, and it's enough. Solid beech with a water-based, non-toxic finish. No batteries to replace, no off switch to hunt for. **2.** Every toy in the hou...
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Google ad, api mocking tool
### Headlines - API Mocking Tool - Mock the API That Isn't Ready - Stop Waiting on the Backend - Fake Responses, Real Progress - Frontend Blocked? Mock It - Build Against Mock Responses - Mock APIs for Developers - Mock the Endpoint, Ship the UI - No Backend Yet? No Problem - Start Mocking Your API ### Descriptions - ...
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page for our sofa cleaning service, Fairview
# The sofa everyone sits on is starting to show it. Sofa cleaning in Fairview. Spills, marks, a dull tired look from years of use. Tell us what's on your sofa and we'll quote for cleaning it, here in Fairview. **Get my sofa cleaning quote** Send the sofa size, the fabric if you know it, and a photo of anything you'r...
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hi, we run a small dog daycare in Tucson and we're doing Thanksgiving week boarding, need an email to existing clients. only 20 spots and they go fast, $55 a night, booked by nov 15. friendly not pushy... and mention we send photo updates every day, people love that
**Subject:** 20 Thanksgiving spots, and they go fast **Preheader:** $55 a night, a photo of your dog every day, book by November 15. Hi [first name], Heading out of town for Thanksgiving? We're doing Thanksgiving-week boarding again, and we've got room for 20 dogs. Last-minute is not a plan; they go fast. $55 a nigh...
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Linkedin post for our company page. Our software routes software purchase requests through finance, security and legal. Plans start at $84k a year. Point is you can see where a request is stuck and who its waiting on. CTA message us for a walkthrough
Day 11 on a software request. Finance approved it. Security? Nobody knows who has it. Our software routes every software purchase request through finance, security and legal, and shows you exactly where it's sitting and whose desk it's on. The chase turns into one message to one named person. Plans start at $84k a ye...
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Facebook ad for my cocoa oat cluster snack bags
**Primary text:** It's 3pm and the desk drawer is empty again. Cocoa oat clusters: crunchy, chocolatey, in a bag that fits in the drawer. Stock the drawer. **Headline:** Cocoa oat clusters, by the bag. **CTA:** Shop Now
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Product page rewrite for our app (iOS + Android). Flow is: take photos on the site visit, mark them up, they become a room-by-room punch list, export a branded PDF for the client. Single user, clients never log in, it's not team or project management software and the page should be clear about that because we get refun...
# Walk the site, photograph the problems, hand the client a branded punch list PDF before you're back at the truck. One app on iOS and Android. Take the photo, mark it up, and it files itself into a room-by-room punch list. Export a PDF with your branding on it. Your client gets a document, not a login. Built for one...
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Instagram caption for a single product photo: our cedar potting station, shot beside a client's greenhouse in Vermont. Product facts: - Freestanding potting bench, untreated western red cedar - Removable galvanized steel soil tray, slatted lower shelf, three tool hooks - $2,450 including curbside delivery; assembly re...
Beside a client's greenhouse in Vermont, doing the job it will do for decades: seedlings potted on, tools within reach, soil where it belongs. Untreated western red cedar, the kind that weathers instead of wearing out. A removable galvanized steel tray takes the soil, the slatted shelf takes the spare pots, and three ...
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LinkedIn sponsored post, goal is demo bookings. We're a SaaS out of Amsterdam that tracks a company's software subscriptions (contract, renewal date, owner) and pushes a renewal review to finance and IT ahead of the notice deadline. Targeting finance directors and heads of IT at 500-2,000 employee companies in Benelux,...
### 1. The missed notice period **Primary text** Finance decided not to renew. Then someone read the contract: the notice period had already closed. Another year, paid in full. A renewal-date reminder doesn't prevent that. A review pushed to finance and IT ahead of the notice deadline does. We track every software s...
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Follow-up email for demo no-shows... no wait, for people who watched the demo and then went quiet. Platform engineering directors, mostly 200-800 dev orgs. Product checks API changes in pull requests and lets platform teams set policies that block a release, sits on top of their existing repos and CI. Under 200 words, ...
**Subject option 1:** The one API change that should block a release **Subject option 2:** Where would you draw the line? **Preheader:** One real scenario from your repos, no second demo. Hi {{first_name}}, Since the demo, one question is worth answering before anything else: which API change last bit you in product...
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ad for twitter/x and reddit for my webhook testing tool. command line, gives you a temporary https url, shows headers and payload of whatever hits it, replay to localhost. $7 per dev a month. for indie devs / freelancers doing integration work. primary text + headline + signup button. technical, no marketing voice. don...
## Twitter/X **Primary text** Your client's webhook fires at a public URL. Your handler is on localhost. One command gives you a temporary HTTPS URL, shows every header and payload that hits it, and replays the request to localhost. $7/dev/month. **Headline** Temporary HTTPS URL. Inspect. Replay to localhost. **Sign...
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Current hero on our site, not converting (1.1% click through to product pages). Rewrite it. Sustainable Knitwear, Made in Scotland Our jumpers are crafted from the finest lambswool and designed to last a lifetime. Shop the collection. [Shop Now] We make lambswool jumpers at a small mill in the Borders. Visitors are s...
**Knitted start to finish in our own mill in the Scottish Borders.** Lambswool jumpers made by the people who own the mill, designed to last a lifetime, not a season. **[Find my jumper]**
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product page for our client request tracker
# The client asked for it on a call three weeks ago. Where is it now? A client request tracker gives every ask a place to land, so nothing lives in your memory, a chat thread or a sticky note. - **Capture it** the moment the client asks, before the next call starts. - **See everything open** in one list when it's tim...
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Brief for a service page. Client is a residential bin-cleaning start-up in Burlington, Ontario (two brothers, one truck). They pressure-wash and sanitise garbage, recycling and green bins at the curb on collection day. Deliverable: main service page. Sections: hero, how it works (3 steps), what's included, pricing blo...
# The truck empties your bin. The smell stays behind. Two brothers, one truck, and a pressure washer. We clean and sanitise garbage, recycling and green bins right at your curb in Burlington and Aldershot, on collection day, after the municipal pickup. Book online. No contract. Leave the empty bins out and we handle ...
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google ad for my trash can cleaning business, Tulsa
### Headlines - Tulsa Trash Can Cleaning - Trash Can Cleaning In Tulsa - Get The Smell Out Of The Bin - Stop Hosing Out The Trash Can - Maggots In The Can Again? - Clean Cans Without The Hose - Local Tulsa Bin Cleaning - Tulsa Garbage Can Cleaning - Get A Trash Can Cleaning Quote - Get Your Quote Today ### Description...
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homepage hero for my recruiting business, I place nurses and CNAs in nursing homes and home care agencies around Phoenix, 2 years solo. want them to book a 15 min call. 3 headline options and a line under each, something that says i'm not a giant staffing firm
### Option 1 **One recruiter, Phoenix only, nurses and CNAs. You talk to me, not an account manager.** Two years placing nurses and CNAs in Phoenix-area nursing homes and home care agencies, and I'm still the only person you'll ever deal with. ### Option 2 **Your DON shouldn't have to explain the same opening to three...
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LinkedIn ad for our access review tool. Retargeting audience: people who visited the pricing page in the last 30 days but didn't book anything, so this doesn't need to explain the whole category. What it does: IT managers upload a user list as CSV, assign each department an owner, owners click keep/remove on each pers...
### Variation 1 You looked at the pricing page. The quarterly review is still in a spreadsheet. $349/month, billed annually, up to 150 employees, unlimited reviewers. Here's what that buys you this quarter: Upload the user list as a CSV. Assign each department an owner. Owners click keep or remove on each person. Exp...
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Landing page hero for a staffing agency placing temp warehouse and light industrial workers, Dallas–Fort Worth. This hero is for employers only, workers get their own page. Pitch: we fill shifts within 24 hours, workers are pre-screened, we handle payroll and workers comp. No pricing on the site. 3 headline options + s...
### Headline options 1. Shift uncovered? Pre-screened warehouse workers on your floor within 24 hours. 2. Request workers today. They're on the line tomorrow. 3. Warehouse and light industrial temps, Dallas–Fort Worth, filled within 24 hours. ### Subhead Tell us the shift, the headcount and the site. We send pre-scree...
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insta caption for our new catnip toys, we sew them ourselves, 3 for $12, link in bio. two person shop in Portland, first proper product so dont go over the top, just cute and short. we grow the catnip ourselves, maybe mention that. one version with emojis one without
**With emojis** Your cat's next favourite thing started as a catnip plant 🌿 We grow the catnip, we sew the toys, just the two of us here in Portland. Our first proper product 🐈 3 for $12, link in bio 🧵 **Without emojis** Your cat's next favourite thing started as a catnip plant. We grow the catnip, we sew the to...
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ok so context. i run a small tutoring centre in Dubai (Al Barsha), we do maths and science for grades 6-12, mostly British and IB curriculum kids. we have a list of maybe 900 parents, some are current, a lot are people who came for a trial lesson last year or enquired and then disappeared. school starts again end of au...
**Subject: Book 10 sessions before 5 Sept, get the 11th free** Hi [parent's name], School is back at the end of August. If maths or science was the problem last year, here's the plan for this year. **Back-to-school offer:** book a block of 10 sessions before 5 September and your child gets 1 extra session free. That...
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LinkedIn post for our physical therapy clinic (2 locations, Raleigh). Angle: we now do direct-access appointments, no doctor referral needed in North Carolina, and most people have no idea that's a thing. Educate first, then a soft push to book. Audience is 35-55 desk workers with neck and back stuff. $95 self-pay eval...
### Version 1: Referral fact In North Carolina, you don't need a doctor's referral to see a physical therapist. Most people don't know that. So they book a doctor's appointment, wait for it, sit through it, and get told to see a PT. Weeks gone, neck still stiff. We now take direct-access appointments at both of our ...
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LinkedIn post promoting my paid newsletter for freelance designers, it's about pricing: every issue breaks down one real project quote (anonymised), what was charged, what should have been charged, and why. Weekly, $8/month or $70/year. Angle: designers underprice because they've never seen anyone else's numbers. Shoul...
Version 1 A designer quotes $600 for a landing page. (Made up, but stay with me.) Six sections, client supplies the copy, eight hours of work. $75 an hour. Fine. What the quote left out: Kickoff call and research, 2 hours. Two rounds of revisions, 3 hours. Feedback calls, 1 hour. Handoff and fixes, 2 hours. Sixteen...
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i do mobile car detailing in Tampa, need the services page text, mainly the interior detail package, $180 sedan $220 suv. dont mention ceramic coating we stopped doing it. want people to text us to book
# Crumbs in the seat rails, a coffee ring in the cupholder, that smell you've stopped noticing. We fix the inside of your car in your Tampa driveway. Interior detail, done where the car is parked. $180 for a sedan, $220 for an SUV. One text books it. **Text us to book: [phone number]** Send your make, model and where...
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so i've been putting off doing our instagram properly for months. we're a small pilates and yoga studio in Tiong Bahru, reformer pilates mainly, 6 reformers so classes are tiny, plus mat yoga in the evenings. what we have going for us: instructors who remember your name and your dodgy knee, and we're cheaper than the f...
### Short Hey, we're doing 6am reformer classes now. Tuesdays and Thursdays in Tiong Bahru, first one's 14 October. 6 reformers, so it's you and five others, and we'll know your name (and your knee) by the second week. S$38 for a drop-in. Book on the website, then go be smug at your desk before anyone else has had c...
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Email to the people who joined our bread subscription waitlist in the spring but never converted once we opened it up. Small sourdough bakery in Asheville. Subscription is one loaf a week, pickup Saturdays at the shop or delivery inside city limits, and you can pause anytime from your account page. My guess is they eit...
**Subject option 1 — Straight:** Pause it any time. Your weekly loaf, when you want it. **Subject option 2 — Cheeky:** It's bread, not a mortgage. **Preheader:** One sourdough loaf a week, Saturday pickup or delivery in Asheville. Pause from your account page whenever. **Body:** Hi [First name], You can pause the s...
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ok so context. i run a small advisory shop, 3 of us, all ex corporate finance, and the thing we actually sell most of is a 6 week engagement we call a sale-ready finance sprint. basically an owner of a private manufacturer ($15m to $60m revenue, family owned a lot of the time) is thinking about selling in the next year...
### Without price **Headlines** - Sale-Ready Finance in 6 Weeks - Normalized Earnings Workbook - Ranked Data Room Checklist **Descriptions** - Selling a $15m–$60m manufacturer in 1–2 years? Diligence-ready numbers. Request a consult. - Addbacks, owner comp, one-offs normalized in 6 weeks. Not the banker. Request a co...
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Notes from my call with our venue coordinator below, need an email to couples who toured the barn this spring but haven't put down a deposit. Subject line + email, short, they've already seen the place. - 4 Saturdays left in Oct/Nov 2027, summer dates gone - Venue fee $6,800 Saturday, $4,900 Fri/Sun. Includes tables, ...
**Subject:** 4 Saturdays left, and 2026 pricing if you book this month **Preheader:** Oct/Nov 2027 only. Summer dates are gone. Hi [First names], You've walked the barn, so straight to the update: summer 2027 is fully booked, and there are 4 Saturdays left across October and November 2027. Put a deposit down by the ...
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our current product page for the 8x10 greenhouse kit is below. problem: we keep getting emails after delivery saying "i didnt realize i had to build this". rewrite it so nobody is surprised, ends with an order button vale 8x10 greenhouse beautiful aluminum frame greenhouse with tempered glass panels. sliding door. two...
# Vale 8×10 Greenhouse Kit ## Arrives flat-packed. Two people and a weekend turn it into a greenhouse. An 8 ft × 10 ft aluminum-frame greenhouse with tempered glass panels, a sliding door and two manual roof vents, for home gardeners who want to build it themselves. Read the next section before you order, because the ...
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context: i'm a freelance designer who got annoyed enough at my own finances that i built a little tool with a developer friend, and now we're trying to actually get strangers to use it. it's a cash flow tracker for freelancers, designers, writers, that kind of person. you upload your bank csv (no bank login, we didn't ...
**Primary text** You got paid $4k on the 3rd. It's the 20th. Is rent fine? Probably. I'm a freelance designer, and "probably" was my entire financial system until I got annoyed enough to build something with a developer friend. Here's what it does: you upload your bank CSV (no bank login, we didn't want that respons...
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instagram ad for our planner app for freelancers, daily time blocks
Primary text Freelancer's Tuesday: two clients, one invoice, the thing you're building for yourself, and no boss deciding what comes first. The planner gives each one a time block, so 9 to 11 is Client A, not "whatever's loudest." Headline Every hour gets a job. CTA Get the app
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hi, we are two developers in Brno, we built a hosted webhook inbox - temporary endpoint, you see every request and can replay it to localhost. boring product so please make the top of the page a little bit fun, not childish. headline, one sentence, 3 bullets, button
# Your webhook called. We took a message. Two developers in Brno built a temporary endpoint that catches every request, shows you exactly what came in, and replays it to localhost whenever you're ready. - A hosted URL in seconds, no deploy, no ngrok tunnel to babysit - Every header and body, exactly as the sender sen...
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product description for our garden designer app, works offline
## No signal at the bottom of the client's garden? Keep designing. Our garden designer app works fully offline, so you can measure, sketch and plan while you're standing on the site. - Works with no Wi-Fi and no mobile signal - Built for garden designers, not general drawing - Plan on site, finish at the desk **Get ...
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facebook ad for maths tutoring in Dubai, small groups at our centre in Al Barsha
**Primary text** Your child says they get it in class. Then the homework says otherwise. Small-group maths tutoring at our centre in Al Barsha. Groups small enough that every question gets answered, and the tutor spots where it's going wrong before the exam does. Message us with your child's year and the topic that's...
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sales email pls for our chores app, shared checklist and reminders
**Subject:** Who took the bins out last week? **Preheader:** One shared checklist, reminders sent to whoever's turn it is. Nobody minds doing the dishes. Everybody minds being asked twice. That's the part our chores app removes. One shared checklist for the whole household, so everyone can see what's done and what's ...
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hi, i volunteer with a small animal rescue in Singapore, we take in stray cats and community dogs and rehome them. we're redoing our website and need the text for the top of the homepage. we dont sell anything, the main thing is we want people to either adopt or give monthly. its all volunteers, no paid staff, been goi...
# Every cat and dog here is one home away from a whole new life. Since 2019, a group of volunteers in Singapore has been taking in stray cats and community dogs and finding them families. You can be the family, or you can be the reason the next one gets found. **[Meet the animals looking for a home]** **[Give monthly...
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Linkedin post for our booking + membership software for small independent gyms and climbing walls, we're launching properly after a year in beta. Goal is demo requests, dont make it sound corporate
You didn't open a climbing wall to spend Sunday night working out who's paid and who's booked in. That's the bit we've spent the last year building software for: booking and memberships for small independent gyms and climbing walls. Twelve months in beta with real walls and real gyms, and it's now properly launched. ...
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product page, full interior detail, Fort Worth
# The crumbs, the coffee rings, the smell you've stopped noticing. Full interior detail, Fort Worth. You wash the outside because everyone sees it. You sit inside it every day. A full interior detail goes through the whole cabin, not a quick vacuum and wipe. Tell us what bugs you most and that's where we start. - Se...
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notes from the call with the client below, they need a page for their photo booth rental. i'm the freelancer writing it. - open-air booth, fits like 8 people - Nashville + 50 miles - packages: 3hr $650, 4hr $800 - unlimited prints, digital gallery next day, attendant included - mostly weddings, also corporate - owner ...
# Eight people in the frame, unlimited prints, and someone running it all night. Open-air photo booth for weddings and corporate events in Nashville and within 50 miles. Run by Priya since 2019. Packages from $650, attendant included. **[Check my date]** Send your date and venue and Priya will confirm availability. ...
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Google ad for gutter cleaning in Bangalore before monsoon
### Headlines - Gutter Cleaning Bangalore - Gutter Cleaning Before Monsoon - Monsoon Coming. Gutters Ready? - Clear Blocked Gutters Now - Roof Gutter Cleaning Service - Stop Overflow Before the Rains - Book Pre-Monsoon Cleaning - Leaves Out Before the Rain - Get a Gutter Cleaning Quote - Bangalore Gutter Cleaners ### ...
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Running Meta ads for our online furniture shop, Melbourne based, ship nationally. Product for this one is a solid Tassie oak bedside table, two drawers, comes flat-packed but it's 6 screws not 60. A$349 each or A$620 for the pair, free delivery to metro areas. Cold traffic, mostly 30-50 year old renters and first home ...
### 1. Pair deal **Primary text** Two bedsides, A$620, free metro delivery. That's A$78 less than buying them one at a time, and neither of them is particleboard. Solid Tassie oak, two drawers each, six screws to assemble. Ships Australia-wide from Melbourne. **Headline** The pair for A$620. Save A$78. **CTA:** Sho...
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landing page top section for our waitlist + table management app for small restaurants, i built it with my brother who owns a diner in Ohio. guests put their name in on a tablet at the host stand or by text, get a text when the table is ready, no more shouting names across the room. mostly for independent places with 1...
# Stop shouting names across the room. Text guests when their table's ready. Guests add themselves on a tablet at the host stand or by text, then get a text when it's time to sit. Built with my brother, who runs a diner in Ohio and was done with the clipboard. **Show me how it works** Runs on a tablet at your host st...
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nah too long. the email for the linen shirt restock — cut it to 3 short paragraphs, keep the A$129 and the free shipping over A$150, lose the bit about the fabric mill. and 2 more subject lines, shorter ones
**Subject options** - It's back - Linen, restocked The linen shirt is back. If your size was gone last time, it's here now. A$129. Add anything over A$21 to the order and shipping is free (that's the A$150 threshold). Grab your size before it goes again. **Shop the restock →** Note: I don't have the earlier draft,...
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need the top bit of our website rewritten, we do dog washing out of a van in Geelong and surrounds... basically we come to you, hydrobath, blow dry, nails, ears. been going 2 years but the site still says "coming soon" in places lol. headline and a couple of lines under it and a book now button. lot of our customers ar...
# Can't lift the dog into the bath anymore? We bring the bath to you. Hydrobath, blow dry, nails and ears, all done in our van at your front door. No lifting, no wet bathroom, no wrestling a dog into the car. Two years of washing dogs across Geelong and surrounds. **[Book my dog's wash]**
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linkedin ad, flaky test tool
**Primary text** Red build. Rerun. Green. Nobody knows which one was telling the truth. Every rerun buys you a merge and costs you a little trust in the whole suite. This is a tool built for exactly that problem: the tests that fail without a reason. **Headline** Stop rerunning. Start finding the flaky ones. **CTA**...
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my tea subscription needs a proper product page. 2 loose leaf teas a month, 50g each, with tasting notes, i pick them (its for people who dont know where to start). £22 a month incl UK postage, cancel anytime. make it feel easy to try not a tea snob thing
# Two loose leaf teas a month, picked for you. £22, postage included, cancel whenever. You don't need to know anything about tea. I choose two, send 50g of each with tasting notes, and you find out what you like. **£22 a month including UK postage. That's £11 a tea, 100g in total. Cancel anytime.** **[Try the tea su...
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Google ads for desk cable clips, 6 pack, charcoal silicone, they stick to the edge of your desk so the charger cable doesnt slide onto the floor. People search 'cable clips desk' 'cord holder'... Need like 10 headlines and 4 descriptions, keep it simple
### Headlines 1. Desk Cable Clips, 6 Pack 2. Cord Holder For Your Desk 3. Stop Cables Hitting The Floor 4. Sticks To Your Desk Edge 5. Charcoal Silicone, 6 Clips 6. Charger Cable Stays Put 7. No More Fishing For Cables 8. Cable Clips That Stick On 9. 6 Clips, Every Cable Held 10. Get The 6 Pack ### Descriptions 1. Six...
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facebook ad for our dish rack, it folds flat for small apartment kitchens (amsterdam kitchens are tiny). €69. maybe only preorder at launch, stock comes november, dont know yet, so two endings, order now and preorder. audience is apartments, young couples and students
Primary text Your Amsterdam kitchen has one bit of counter, and the dish rack lives on it. This one folds flat once the dishes are dry. Slide it into the cupboard, get the counter back, cook. €69. Headline Folds flat. Counter back. €69. Order-now ending Get your counter back. Order now, €69. CTA: Shop now Preorder...
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ok so background. i'm a solo dev, i built this thing for myself about a year ago because i was losing my mind re-triggering webhooks from a certain payment provider every time i changed one line in my handler. it's a desktop app, mac and windows, you get a temporary public endpoint, point whatever service at it, it cap...
# Replay the webhook. Don't re-trigger the payment. A desktop app that gives you a temporary public endpoint, captures whatever hits it, and replays any saved request to localhost as many times as your handler needs. - Temporary public endpoint. Point the service at it. No tunnel setup, no platform team. - Headers an...
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my business partner ran this through an AI thing for our linkedin and it's… a lot. we're a small staffing agency in Columbus, temp warehouse and light industrial workers. can you rewrite it so it sounds like a person? shorter, no emojis, no hashtag wall. --- 🚀 Are YOU tired of staffing headaches? 🚀 We provide TOP-TI...
Short-handed for tomorrow's shift? We place temp warehouse and light industrial workers around Columbus: pickers, packers, forklift operators. Same-day placements are available. Every worker we send has passed a background check and a skills check. That's the process. Message us with the role, the shift and how many...
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facebook ad for my career coaching, im in Manchester but do it all on zoom. mostly people in their 30s/40s stuck in a job they hate and dont know what to move into. 6 session package for £540 or a single 'where do i even start' session for £95. friendly, like we're talking to a mate. really i want people booking the £9...
**Primary text** Hate your job but can't say what you'd do instead? That's the whole problem, and it's exactly what the £95 session is for. One session on Zoom, you and me, working out what's actually wrong with the current job and what you'd want more of. You don't need a plan. "Not this" is enough to start with. I...
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Search ad brief - paid community for freelance grant writers. What it is: a private community (forum + monthly live calls + a shared template library) for freelance grant writers working with US nonprofits. Who's searching: mostly established freelancers (3+ years) typing things like 'grant writer community', 'grant ...
## Ad Set 1: Templates **Headlines** 1. Grant Writing Templates 2. Funder-Specific Templates 3. New Templates Every Month 4. Stop Rewriting the Same LOI 5. Templates by Working Writers 6. Join the Template Library **Descriptions** 1. Funder-specific grant templates, updated monthly, built by freelancers who use them....