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Homepage headline for my fractions practice site, for parents. Button text too
# Fractions make sense in class and fall apart at the kitchen table. Fix tonight's homework here. **Button:** Start fractions practice
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LinkedIn post for our 12-week instructional design course, run from Bengaluru, fully online. Weekly live workshops (Saturday mornings IST), feedback on 3 portfolio projects, final instructor review. ₹85,000 paid upfront, EMI available through our payment partner. Target is experienced school and college teachers thinki...
### Version 1: Career switch Ten years of teaching, and the pay slip still looks like year three? I hear this most often from teachers 8–12 years in. They're good at the job. They're tired of what it pays. And they've noticed that corporate training and L&D teams hire people who can design learning, which is what the...
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Sales email for our managed IT support, going to a cold list we compiled from public directories. We're a 6-person IT firm in Denver. Offer is a flat $95/user/month covering helpdesk, patching, backups and basic security monitoring, with a free 1-hour 'what's actually wrong with your setup' review as the entry point. G...
### Subject lines 1. What's actually wrong with your setup (free hour) 2. $95 a user a month, all in 3. Quick one from another small business in Denver ### Short version Hi [First name], If your computers only get attention when something breaks, you're paying for it in lost afternoons. We're a six-person IT firm i...
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Landing page hero for a healthcare staffing agency (I'm their marketing contractor). Travel nurses and allied health, 8–13 week hospital contracts across the Southeast. Nurse side, goal is application starts. Selling points: a recruiter who actually answers the phone, weekly pay, housing stipend, pay rate visible up fr...
# See the pay rate before you apply. 8–13 week hospital contracts across the Southeast. For travel nurses and allied health professionals: weekly pay, a housing stipend, and a recruiter who picks up when you call. **Application-first CTA:** Apply now **Browse-first CTA:** Browse contracts **Swap-in line (add once th...
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Sales email brief. We run a team-building events company in Singapore; core product is a half-day cook-off style challenge hosted at our studio in Tanjong Pagar, 20-60 participants, run by two facilitators, ingredients and clean-up included. Recipients: HR and office managers who attended our open showcase evening las...
### Subject line options 1. The half-day version of what you cooked last month 2. Q1 dates for the cook-off, if you want them 3. 30 minutes wasn't enough time to burn anything **Preheader:** Half a day, 20–60 people, two facilitators, ingredients and clean-up done. Reply with dates. Hi [First name], You cooked with ...
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Insta caption for a body balm we launched last month – fragrance free, shea + jojoba + squalane, 90g glass jar. It's specifically for the rough bits: elbows, knees, shins, heels. Our last few posts were product-on-marble shots with 'luxury skincare' captions and engagement was dead, so I want to try something more real...
### 1. Short Dry winter shins. Everyone has them. Nobody posts them. Fragrance-free body balm with shea, jojoba and squalane, made for elbows, knees, shins and heels. 90g glass jar. Link in bio. ### 2. Medium (question hook) Anyone else pull off their socks in December and find their shins have gone grey and flaky? ...
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Service page for our trash can cleaning business, suburbs east of Cleveland. We come Fridays only, you leave the empty can at the curb, we pressure wash inside and out, unscented deodorizer, you don't need to be home. $15 per can, one-time, no subscription. This page is the landing spot for a neighborhood-app and door-...
# $15 a can, Fridays, and you don't have to be home. Leave the empty can at the curb Friday morning. We pressure wash it inside and out, hit it with unscented deodorizer, and leave it clean. One-time, no subscription. Suburbs east of Cleveland. **[Book a Friday]** ## How it works 1. **Book a Friday.** Tell us how m...
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Product page copy for a printable maths resource — 20 fraction activities for 7–9 year olds with answer sheets, instant PDF download. Mostly UK parents home-educating or topping up after school, plus some primary teachers. Pricing isn't final: either £4 for the single pack or £7 for a bundle of three, so write it so th...
# Fractions clicked in class and vanished by teatime? 20 printable activities, ready tonight. Instant PDF download. Print the page you need, sit down together, check it against the answer sheet. Twenty activities for 7–9 year olds, so there's one for tonight and nineteen for the nights after. **[Buy now]** ## What's...
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ok the presentation coaching email is good but way too long, cut it in half. keep the 4-week group program, $450, starts oct 6. 3 subject line options
**Subject line options** 1. Your next presentation. October 6. $450. 2. 4 weeks of coaching before your next big presentation 3. Presentation coaching, small group, starts Oct 6 **Preheader:** A 4-week group programme for $450, which is $112.50 a week. Hi, You know the material. The room still goes blurry when you s...
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hey can you do an email to our customers about our wooden balance board for toddlers, we just restocked after being sold out since july. its beech, curved, holds up to 200 lbs, $89 and free shipping over $75. most of our list are parents of 1-4 year olds. black friday is coming and i DONT want to discount it so this is...
**Subject option 1:** Sold out since July. It's back. **Subject option 2:** The beech balance board is back in stock **Preheader:** $89, ships free. And no, we're not discounting it for Black Friday. Hi [first name], The balance board is back. It sold out in July and we've just restocked. Same board: curved beech, ...
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this is the top of our site and nobody is booking: Optimize Your Client Handoff Process We help agencies streamline the transition from sales to delivery through a comprehensive 2-week review. [Learn More] what we actually do: review an agency's intake form and project setup, hand back a priority list in 2 weeks. mak...
# You closed the deal. Now the handoff to delivery is where it gets messy. Send us your intake form and project setup. We go through both, and two weeks later you get a priority list: what to fix first, what can wait. **[Book my 2-week handoff review]**
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facebook post for my mobile car detailing, i come to your driveway, interior and exterior from $120
Your car gets detailed in your driveway. You don't go anywhere. Interior and exterior, from $120. I bring everything and do the work while you get on with your day. Message me with what you drive and where you are, and I'll send you a price and a time.
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Insta post, kids math class
"I'm bad at math." Kids say it at 7 and believe it at 17. Our kids' math class is where that sentence gets unlearned. Small enough that a question gets answered, not lost. Practice that builds one step on the last, so "I can't" turns into "let me try." DM us for class details and times.
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Homepage hero: custom home library builder Six-person cabinetry shop in the Hudson Valley, almost all we do is floor-to-ceiling home libraries: hardwood shelving built for the room, integrated lighting, rolling ladders where the ceiling allows, installed by our own crew. Projects start at $24,000, written quote after...
**Headline option 1 — The room** Floor-to-ceiling shelves, cut to your walls, ladder and all. **Headline option 2 — The books** Every book you own, on a shelf you can reach. **Supporting paragraph** Home libraries are nearly all we build: a six-person cabinetry shop in the Hudson Valley making hardwood shelving to fi...
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homepage text for a budgeting app, uk, what you can spend till payday. button vague, trial not decided
# What can you actually spend before payday? One number: what's yours to spend until you're paid again. No sums in the supermarket queue. **See what I can spend** ## The food shop, a night out, the thing that just broke Check the number, decide, move on. Payday doesn't move. The number does, every time you spend. ...
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these all sound the same. redo the inspection app headlines, mix it up, some about offline, some about the pdf reports. still no free trial mention
### Offline 1. Inspect With No Signal 2. Notes That Work Offline 3. No Wi-Fi On Site? No Problem 4. Offline Notes, Synced Later 5. Basement, Roof, No Bars: Fine ### PDF reports 6. Site to PDF Report Same Day 7. Send the PDF From the Truck 8. Findings Into a PDF Report 9. One Tap. Finished PDF Report. 10. Reports Clien...
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Hero section for my real estate team's site, Sacramento suburbs. Want home valuation requests - we send a free pricing report within 24 hrs. Not sure if the button should say "get my home value" or "whats my home worth", you pick. Headline, subline, button. Dont say #1 or top agent
**Headline:** Find out what your Sacramento-suburb home would sell for today. Free report within 24 hours. **Subline:** Tell us the address. Our local team sends you a free pricing report within 24 hours. **Button:** Get my home value — Note: I went with "Get my home value" because it reads as the thing they receive...
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LinkedIn + Meta ad for our fractional CFO service. We work with e-commerce brands doing $2-10M who've outgrown their bookkeeper. Retainer is $3,500/month, 3-month minimum. Promo this quarter is either the first month at half price or a free cash-flow audit, I'll know by Friday, so write both variants. Primary text ~80 ...
### Variant 1: First month half price **Primary text** You're doing $2–10M and your bookkeeper still closes the month. So you get last month's numbers and nobody to tell you what to do with them. A fractional CFO does the next part: reads the numbers and tells you what to change before next quarter, not after. This ...
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Context: I'm a French teacher in Ottawa, been teaching adults for 11 years, mostly federal government employees who need to pass their second language evaluation for work (if you know you know). I'm finally putting my course online instead of doing everything in person. It's a 10 week course, 2 live classes a week on Z...
# The oral exam is where people fail. So that's where we spend the ten weeks. Around 60 of my students have passed their second language evaluation in the last three years. Ten weeks online, two live Zoom classes a week, never more than 8 people, and every writing assignment marked by me. **[Reserve my seat in the ne...
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Upgrade email, free-to-Plus conversion. Context: we're a two-person team behind a houseplant care app (iOS/Android, mostly Canadian and US users). The free plan lets you add up to 3 plants with watering reminders and photo notes. Plus removes the plant limit and adds a searchable photo/care history per plant. Segment...
### Subject line options 1. Plus removes the 3-plant limit 2. Plant number four has been waiting 3. You've hit the wall (the 3-plant one) ### Preheader Unlimited plants, plus a searchable photo and care history for each one. ### Body Hi [First name], You've got 3 plants in the app and, we're guessing, more than 3 in...
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our google ads for our bathroom renovation company in Cape Town bring the wrong people, small jobs. rewrite for proper renovation enquiries: Headline 1: Bathroom Renovations Cape Town Headline 2: Affordable Bathroom Fitters Headline 3: Call Now For Free Quote Description 1: We do bathrooms, plumbing, tiling and more. ...
### Headlines 1. Bathroom Renovations Cape Town 2. Full Renovations From R95 000 3. Complete Bathroom Renovations 4. Full Bathroom Redo, From R95k 5. Not Repairs. Full Renovations 6. Cape Town Bathroom Renovators 7. Get a Free Renovation Quote 8. Plumbing, Tiling, the Lot ### Descriptions 1. Full bathroom renovations ...
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product page for our procurement approval software. one place for purchase requests, approval routing, contracts attached and a history of who approved what. buyers are procurement directors and finance leads at 1000-5000 person companies. its enterprise, cta is book a demo. current page reads like a lawyer wrote it, m...
# "Who approved this?" Answered in one click, with the contract attached. Purchase requests, approval routing, the contract, and the record of who signed off, in one place. Built for procurement and finance teams at 1,000–5,000 person companies. **Book a demo** Bring one real purchase request. We'll walk it from sub...
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Meta ad for my brow and lash studio in Nashville. Two rooms, me plus one other tech. Services: brow lamination, lash lifts, the combo. Bookings have been soft on weekday mornings so this campaign is specifically to fill Tue–Thu before noon. Targeting women 22–40 within 8 miles, cold, we've never run ads before (all wo...
### 1. Weekday mornings **Primary text:** Brows before work, back at your desk before anyone notices you left. Brow lamination, lash lift or both. Tue–Thu before noon, Nashville. **Headline:** Book a Tue–Thu morning slot **CTA:** Book now ### 2. Lasts 6–8 weeks **Primary text:** One Tuesday morning. Six to eight weeks...
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headline for the top of our site, flower subscription for offices and hotel lobbies in Austin
Fresh flowers in your Austin lobby, on a schedule. Nobody on staff has to remember to order them.
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insta caption for our sparkling pear oolong tea, 250ml cans. good for afternoons
3pm. The coffee's worn off and the afternoon hasn't. Crack a 250ml can of sparkling pear oolong instead. Pear on top, oolong underneath, bubbles all the way through. What time does your afternoon slump hit? Ours is 3 on the dot.
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here's the email we sent out last spring for the dryer vent cleaning, want to redo it for this year, same offer same price. --- Subject: Dryer Vent Cleaning Available Hi, Spring is here and it is a good time to think about your dryer vent. We offer professional dryer vent cleaning. Our technician will clean the enti...
**Subject:** The duct behind your dryer, cleaned for $179 **Preheader:** Full duct, dryer to outside wall. One weekday visit. You pay after, not before. Hi, You've done the lint trap. The duct behind the dryer, the one that runs all the way to the outside of your house, hasn't seen a brush since it went in. That's t...
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hello, i make oak dining tables in my workshop near Porto. i need the product page text for the new table, 200cm x 90cm, solid oak, seats 6-8. i want it to sound honest, not luxury boutique
# 200 × 90 cm of solid oak. Six for dinner, eight when everyone comes. I make this table in my workshop near Porto, from solid oak, one at a time. It's 200 cm long and 90 cm wide. Six people sit with room to spare; eight fit when you need the extra places. If you're not sure which you'll use more, measure the room an...
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Hey, solo dev here, built a little CLI that captures webhook payloads and replays them to localhost for debugging. Going to charge $5/month. Need the top of the landing page - headline, one line under it, button. Current headline is "Webhook capture and replay" which is boring. Dont oversell it, its a small tool
# Replay the webhook instead of re-triggering it. A CLI that captures webhook payloads and replays them to localhost until your handler behaves. $5/month. **Get the CLI — $5/month**
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im the volunteer coordinator for a small animal rescue in Asheville, doing our fall fundraiser to fix the roof on the cat building. need an instagram post. donations through link in bio, any amount, $25 covers a weeks food for the cats... dont make it sad puppy music type of thing
The cat building's roof needs fixing, and we're not going to make you cry about it. The cats are fine. They'd just like to stay dry. Our small Asheville rescue is raising money this fall to get the roof over the cat building repaired, and that's the whole ask. $25 feeds every cat here for a week. Any amount goes to t...
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google ads, expense splitting app
### Headlines - Expense Splitting App - Split Expenses With Friends - Who Owes What, Sorted - Split The Trip Bill Fairly - Split Rent & Bills Simply - Group Dinner? Split It Fast - Track Shared Costs - No More "I'll Pay You Back" - Settle Up Without Awkwardness - Get The Expense App ### Descriptions - Trip, rent, dinn...
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top of my website, career coach. headline plus one line
# Stuck between "I should be grateful" and "I can't do this for another year"? Career coaching that turns that loop into one decision and a plan you'll actually follow.
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Google ads for our gym management software. We're based in Cork, its for small independent gyms and studios (crossfit boxes, pilates etc), does memberships, class bookings, direct debits and a member app. €89/month flat, no per member fees which is the big difference vs the big players who charge per member. Want peopl...
### Headlines 1. Gym Software, €89/Month Flat 2. No Per-Member Fees 3. Add Members. Bill Stays €89. 4. Built for Independent Gyms 5. CrossFit Box Software 6. Pilates Studio Bookings 7. Memberships & Direct Debits 8. Class Bookings + Member App 9. Made in Cork 10. Book a Demo ### Descriptions 1. €89/month flat: members...
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Hero section for my window cleaning site, Fort Collins, just me and one guy. Running a $29 first-visit deal: up to 6 exterior ground floor windows, glass and sills, no screens. Headline + subhead + button (Book my $29 clean), maybe a trust line under it. I need a few more small jobs this week so make the deal the headl...
### Headline options 1. **$29 gets 6 windows cleaned this week. Fort Collins.** 2. **First clean: 6 exterior windows, glass and sills, $29.** 3. **Under $5 a window. Your first clean, $29.** **Subhead** Up to 6 exterior ground-floor windows, glass and sills, screens not included. It's just the two of us, and we've got...
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google ads for our m&a prep consulting, its a 6 week thing
### Headlines - M&A Prep Consulting - Deal-Ready in 6 Weeks - 6-Week M&A Preparation - Thinking About a Deal? - Before Diligence Starts - 6 Weeks to M&A-Ready - Is Your Business Deal-Ready? - Prep Now, Negotiate Later - Start Your 6-Week M&A Prep - Talk to Us About M&A Prep ### Descriptions - Considering a deal in the...
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Google search ads for our 12x16 ft glass greenhouse. We import them into Melbourne and ship nationally. Aluminium frame, toughened glass, 2 roof vents, gutters both sides. No install or slab included. Search terms we're bidding on: "glass greenhouse kit", "large greenhouse australia", "aluminium greenhouse". Spring's h...
### Headlines 1. 12x16 ft Glass Greenhouse Kit 2. Glass Greenhouse Kit, 12x16 3. Large Greenhouse, Australia 4. Aluminium Greenhouse Kit 5. Toughened Glass, Alu Frame 6. 2 Roof Vents. Twin Gutters. 7. Imported Into Melbourne 8. Ships Australia-Wide 9. Kit Only. No Slab, No Install 10. Get Your Freight Quote ### Descri...
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Product page copy for our fragrance-free body lotion. 250ml pump bottle, glycerin and sunflower oil. It's the everyday after-shower one, not a treatment product. It's our best seller but the page is a paragraph and a buy button and bounce rate is high, so it isn't answering questions. Structure: - 2 headline options -...
## 2 headline options 1. The body lotion for people who've been burned by "lightly scented." 2. After-shower moisture. No fragrance, no essential oils, no surprise. ## Short intro If a scented lotion has ever left your skin worse than before you put it on, you already know what you're looking for: nothing extra. Thi...
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Here's the Instagram ad our freelancer wrote for the fold-down oak desk. Likes but no clicks. Rewrite it shorter, less "luxury", say what the thing does. Elevate your workspace. Introducing our handcrafted white oak wall desk, where timeless design meets modern living. Crafted for the discerning professional, it trans...
A full desk when you're working. A slab of white oak on the wall when you're not. Solid white oak, steel frame. Ships fully assembled: you screw it to the wall, fold it down, done. $1,480, delivered anywhere in the US. Link in bio.
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same thing but for the algebra refresher course instead of the geometry one — 8 weeks, self-paced, weekly live tutor clinic. headlines + descriptions like before
### Headlines 1. Algebra Refresher Course 2. 8-Week Algebra Refresher 3. Self-Paced, With a Live Tutor 4. Weekly Live Tutor Clinic 5. Rusty on Algebra? Start Here 6. Study Nights, Ask Weekly 7. Brush Up on Algebra in 8 Weeks 8. Online Algebra Refresher 9. Get Unstuck Every Week 10. Enrol in the Algebra Refresher ### D...
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Google search ads for our cash flow planning software. You upload bank CSVs (not a bank connection), add expected invoices and bills, and compare week-by-week scenarios. Built for small agencies, 3–15 people. C$119/month for 3 users, 14-day free trial. CTR is fine (around 4%) but conversion to trial is weak, so I thi...
### Headlines 1. Cash Flow Plans From Bank CSVs 2. No Bank Connection Required 3. Week-By-Week Cash Scenarios 4. Built For 3–15 Person Agencies 5. C$119/Month For 3 Users 6. 14-Day Free Trial, Then C$119 7. Try It Free For 14 Days 8. Add Expected Invoices & Bills 9. Cash Flow For Small Agencies 10. Upload A CSV, See Th...
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Hero section for a plumbing company site, Denver metro, current page isn't converting. Family owned, 3 trucks, same-day water heater swaps, upfront quote before we touch anything, tankless and standard. Want: headline (under 10 words), subhead, 3 trust bullets, CTA 'Get a same-day quote'. 2 headline directions, one aro...
## Direction 1: Speed ### No hot water? We swap it today. Same-day water heater replacement across the Denver metro, tankless or standard. You get the full price for the job before we pick up a tool. - Same-day swaps, tankless and standard - Three trucks, so one's usually close to you - Family owned. The name on the...
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facebook ad for our 4 week spreadsheets course for admin staff, weekly live workshop plus practice files. friendly not corporate
**Primary text** You know the spreadsheet could do it for you. You just don't know which button. Four weeks, one live workshop a week, and practice files to work through between sessions, so what you learn on Tuesday is what you use on Wednesday. Built for admin staff, so nobody assumes you already know it. **Headlin...
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Top of my website for my granola company, price not decided so put [price]
# Breakfast that's ready before you are. Granola. Over yoghurt, in milk, or straight from the bag at 4pm. **[price]** **Get the granola — [price]**
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launch email for our oak wall desk, folds down, looks like a cabinet when closed. we might do free install but havent figured out which zip codes so DONT say installation is included, maybe hint somethings coming. short, one CTA
**Subject:** A desk when you need it. A cabinet the rest of the time. **Preheader:** The new oak wall desk is live. And we're working on something for the day it arrives. Hi [first name], Working at the kitchen table means putting your job away before dinner. This desk puts itself away. Our new oak wall desk folds d...
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So we do a high end flower subscription, 2 big arrangements a month delivered to your door, first delivery comes with a really nice vase that you keep. $360/month delivery included, cancel whenever. Need the headline and the button for the top of the site... Its a lot of money I know, so the headline has to make it fee...
# The flowers you notice in a good hotel lobby. Now in your hallway, twice a month. **Button:** Start my subscription, $360/month **Under the button:** Two large arrangements a month, delivery included. The first delivery comes with a vase you keep. Cancel whenever.
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Email about winter tire changeover, Kelowna
**Subject:** Kelowna: your winter tires, booked before the rush **Preheader:** Pick a changeover date now, while the good slots are still open. Hi [first name], Every year the first snow forecast hits Kelowna and every shop's phone rings at once. Book your winter tire changeover now and you're already sorted when it...
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hey need a follow up email after last weeks demo. the software pulls in bank balances read-only, does cash forecasts per entity and intercompany funding schedules. $84k a year for up to 15 entities, implementation quoted separately. want them to book a second call with our solutions guy. not too long
**Subject:** Your entity structure, on the second call **Preheader:** $84k a year for up to 15 entities. Implementation quoted once we've seen your setup. Hi [Name], Last week you saw bank balances pulled in read-only, a cash forecast per entity, and the intercompany funding schedule built from them. The next step is...
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Instagram post for our community bike shop's end-of-year fundraiser. We're a nonprofit in Oakland that fixes up donated bikes for people who need one to get to work. This year we gave away 412 bikes. Goal: $30k by Dec 31, pushing $15/month donors. Give me 3 caption options: one leading with the number of bikes, one wit...
### 1. Lead with the number 412 bikes this year. Every one of them donated, fixed up in our Oakland shop, and handed to someone who needed a way to get to work. That's 412 people who didn't have to choose between the bus fare and something else. We're raising $30,000 by December 31 to do it again next year. $15 a mon...
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Paid LinkedIn ad brief. Company: Bengaluru-based developer platform, Series A, 30 people. The product creates an isolated preview environment for every pull request (seeded test data, access controls, automatic teardown when the PR closes) and it all runs inside the customer's own cloud account; nothing leaves their V...
### Primary text — under 150 characters Preview environments in your VPC, not ours. One per PR, no platform team building it. PR closes, environment gone. Nobody pays for zombies. ### Primary text — under 400 characters Every PR gets an isolated preview environment, running inside your own cloud account. Nothing leave...
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Ok so I own a dog daycare in Tucson, we did free trial days for like 60 dogs in august and only 14 bought a package. Want an email to go out about packages. We have the report cards w photos from trial day so maybe mention that? Its cooling off in oct so maybe an "outdoor play yard is actually nice now" angle. Short, o...
**Subject:** It's finally yard weather in Tucson **Preheader:** Your dog's trial day was one day. Here's how to make it a habit. Remember the photos in your dog's trial-day report card? They had a good day. We'd like to give them more of those. October's cooling off, which means the outdoor play yard is actually nice...
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google ads for our puzzle subscription. 2 printed booklets a month, word logic and number puzzles, mixed difficulty. $24 a month shipping included (US only). customers are mostly 55+, lots of 'got this for my dad' emails. christmas is our big month so one set of ads for gifts and one regular. headlines + descriptions
## Gift ads ### Headlines 1. Puzzle Subscription Gift 2. A Gift He Opens Every Month 3. For the Dad Who Does Puzzles 4. 2 Printed Booklets a Month 5. Word, Logic & Number Puzzles 6. $24/Month, Shipping Included 7. Christmas Gift for Puzzle Fans 8. No Screens, Just a Pencil 9. Mixed Difficulty Every Issue 10. Gift Puzz...
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For a client. She's a business coach who works with owners of trades businesses (plumbers, electricians, HVAC) doing $1–5M a year who are stuck being the person everyone calls. Program is a 12-week group coaching cohort, 8 owners max, weekly 90-minute video call plus a private channel between calls. Next cohort starts ...
### Ad 1 — Can't take a week off **Primary text** Last time you took a week off, how many calls did you take? If you run a plumbing, electrical or HVAC business doing $1–5M and you're still the one everyone calls, you don't own the business. It owns you. 12 weeks. 8 owners, max. One 90-minute video call a week, plus...
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so a bit of background because i told the last tool "write a hero for a footrest" and got something that could've been for any product on earth. we make an under-desk footrest. cork top, plywood base, and the thing that's different is it's reversible: flat side up it's a platform, flip it and the curved side rocks a l...
1. **The footrest that rocks. Flip it when you'd rather it didn't.** 2. **Flat side up, it's a platform. Curved side up, it rocks. $84.** 3. **Made by a fidgeter. Flips flat for everyone else.** 4. **One footrest, two settings. Cork on top, no screws.** 5. **Rocks or doesn't. Your feet decide.** — Note: Leading with t...
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this is what the other tool gave me for an instagram caption for our magnesium drink powder launch, it's so cringe. redo it pls "✨ Introducing the ultimate wellness companion! 🌿 Our premium magnesium blend is here to transform your evenings and unlock your best sleep ever! 💤 Say goodbye to restless nights and hello ...
Next Tuesday. That's the answer to the question you've all been sending. The lemon-ginger magnesium powder drops then. A scoop, a glass of water, in the evening. That's the whole routine. It tastes like lemon and ginger because that's what's in it. 30 servings in the tub. $34. Comment "Tuesday" and we'll nudge you t...
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Homepage header for my flower subscription in Bath, might do a waitlist first, not sure
# Fresh flowers in the house, without remembering to buy them. A flower subscription for Bath homes. If subscriptions are open at launch: **Subscribe** If you go waitlist first: **Join the waitlist** You'll hear the moment subscriptions open.
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Email to the lead-magnet list for our printable fraction kit. Funnel: people download the free fraction number line worksheet, get a 3-email welcome, then this one. Product is a $9 PDF: 12 activities for ages 8-10, fraction cards, parent answer guide, all paper, scissors and pencil, no app. The parents on this list hav...
**Subject option 1:** After the number line: 12 activities, already sorted **Subject option 2:** Naming fractions was step one. Here's step two. **Preheader:** $9 PDF, paper and scissors only, no app. Hi [First name], Your kid can name a fraction now. Next up is telling which of two is bigger, and the number line wo...
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Landing page hero for a magnesium + electrolyte drink powder we're launching in Australia. 30 sachets a tub, unflavoured or lime, no added sugar. Audience: people who already buy hydration powders and are sick of the sickly sweet ones. Mostly 30–50, gym or long-run types, not a bodybuilding look. A$49 for 30 sachets....
### Headline — two options 1. **Hydration powder that doesn't taste like a lolly.** 2. **Magnesium + electrolytes. No added sugar. Unflavoured or lime.** ### Subhead For the gym bag and the long-run pocket: 30 sachets for A$49. Unflavoured if you want water to taste like water, lime if you don't. ### Benefit bullets ...
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facebook ad for my meeting-notes-to-task-list app, $79 a month. dont say it catches everything
Meeting ends. Everyone agreed on things. Nobody wrote down who's doing what. Put your meeting notes in and get a task list back, so the follow-through starts before the next meeting does. $79/month. **Headline:** Meeting notes in. Task list out. **CTA:** Sign Up
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Organic social post (Instagram and Facebook, same copy) for the launch of our client's evening herbal tea. Doing this on the brand's behalf. Product: caffeine-free loose-leaf blend of chamomile, lemon balm and rooibos in a 60 g tin (about 25 cups). Blended and packed in Vermont. Compostable tin liner. Price: $16 per ...
Three tins for $42 until the end of the month. That's $14 a tin instead of $16, for the evening blend you've been asking about. Chamomile, lemon balm and rooibos, caffeine-free, loose-leaf, blended and packed in Vermont. Chamomile gives it the soft, honeyed top note, lemon balm brightens it, and rooibos brings the rou...
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closer, but make the content audit email less corporate. CTA stays 'reply audit'
**Subject:** Read your homepage like a stranger for 10 seconds **Preheader:** Reply "audit" and I'll go through it myself. Hey, Open your homepage and pretend you've never heard of you. Ten seconds in: can you tell what you do and what to click next? Most owners can't, because they wrote it and they know too much. T...
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instagram ad for my wooden toy shop (online, we're in Vermont, 2 people). the thing to push is the stacking rainbow, maple, non toxic water based paint, 12 pieces. black friday is coming and last year we sold out by the 2nd day so want to start early, maybe an 'order before its gone' thing but not fake urgency... its a...
**Primary text** Last Black Friday the stacking rainbow was gone by day two. 12 arches of maple, finished in non-toxic water-based paint, from our two-person shop in Vermont. Stacks, nests, turns into bridges and tunnels, and there's always a way it hasn't been built yet. If it's on this year's list, order it now, wh...
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Instagram post for my pressure washing in Dubai, driveways and villa exteriors, booking by dm
Sand on the driveway, grime up the villa walls, and the whole place looks tired before you've opened the gate. Pressure washing for driveways and villa exteriors, anywhere in Dubai. Booking is by DM. Send us a photo of the driveway or the wall and your area, and we'll reply with a time.
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Brief for a sales email. Client is a dental clinic in Dubai Marina (Marina Smile Dental Clinic), I'm the agency side. Service: in-clinic teeth whitening, one 60-minute session with a dentist, includes a pre-check and a take-home top-up kit. Not everyone is a candidate, the pre-check decides that, and the email should ...
**Subject 1:** Whitening before Eid: [price], top-up kit included **Subject 2:** You asked about whitening. Here's the number. **Preheader:** One 60-minute session with a dentist, pre-check and take-home kit included. Reply or WhatsApp to book. Hi [first name], You asked us about teeth whitening and never booked. He...
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Running search ads for our men's leather belt line, made in a small workshop in Texas, $95 each, free returns. Current campaign gets plenty of clicks but hardly any sales, so I think the ad is over-promising. Need 8 headlines and 4 descriptions that set expectations properly: full-grain leather, one belt, $95, ships in...
### Headlines 1. Full Grain Leather Belt, $95 2. Mens Leather Belt Made in USA 3. Made in a Small Texas Workshop 4. One Belt. $95. Free Returns. 5. Hand Finished in Texas 6. Ships in 2 Days 7. Free Returns on Every Belt 8. Shop $95 Leather Belts ### Descriptions 1. One full-grain leather belt, $95. Machine stitched, h...
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facebook ad for gutter cleaning, Brisbane
**Primary text** Next Brisbane storm: will your gutters drain, or overflow down the walls? Leaves sitting in the gutter now are water running the wrong way in the next downpour. We clear gutters on Brisbane homes. Message us with your suburb and we'll get you a quote. **Headline** Gutters cleared before the next sto...
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Facebook ad for my subscription, every friday we email 5 screen-free activity cards for adults. ₹149 a month, launch offer either first month free or ₹29, not decided so leave a gap. Dont make it sound like a box
**Primary text** It's Friday night and you're scrolling again. Here's something to do instead, in your inbox every Friday. 5 screen-free activity cards for adults, emailed every Friday. Open the email, pick a card, put the phone down and go do it. ₹149 a month. Launch offer: [first month free / first month ₹29] **He...
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closer, but the headline still sounds like every devops tool out there. lead with testing connected services together before merge, and make it obvious it runs inside their own cloud account, that's the whole point. keep the book a walkthrough button. 3 bullets not 5
# Test your connected services together before merge. Inside your own cloud account. Spin up the services a change touches, run them against each other, and find the break before it lands on main. Every environment runs inside your cloud account: your infrastructure, your permissions, nothing handed to a third party. ...
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Meta ad, cold-ish traffic (interest targeting: container gardening, balcony gardening, apartment living). Product is our self-watering balcony planter: rectangular, powder-coated steel shell, removable liner, 3-liter reservoir with a fill gauge you can actually see. Plants not included. $89. Launch offer isn't decided...
### Primary text 1 — under 125 characters Fill gauge you can read from the couch. 3-litre reservoir, steel shell, removable liner. $89. [OFFER] ### Primary text 2 You know the drill with reservoir planters: you forget it's there until the leaves tell you. Ours puts the fill gauge where you'll actually see it, from ac...
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We sell plant pot saucers online, the 6 inch ones, made from recycled plastic. Want to try google ads, ive got like $10 a day for it. People searching for plant saucers already know what they want so no need to explain what a saucer is lol, just why ours. Mostly apartment people with a lot of plants I think based on th...
### Headlines - 6-Inch Plant Saucers - Made From Recycled Plastic - 6" Saucers, Recycled Plastic - 20 Plants, 20 Saucers, Sorted - Fits 6-Inch Pots - Order 6-Inch Saucers Online ### Descriptions - 6-inch plant saucers made from recycled plastic. One size, most of the shelf. Order now. - A lot of plants, small apartmen...
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Facebook/insta ad for my wedding photography in Asheville. 8 hours, 2nd shooter, online gallery, $3800. Want to book 6 more fall weddings. Primary text + headline + a "check my availability" button
**Primary text** I'm booking 6 more fall weddings in Asheville this year. Six, then I'm full. 8 hours, a second shooter so the vows and your mum's face get photographed at the same time, and an online gallery. $3,800 all in. Check my availability for your date before someone else takes it. **Headline** 6 Fall Dates ...
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homepage headline and a line under it for me, im a realtor in Boise
# Buying or selling a home in Boise? Tell me what you're after and I'll walk you through what it takes, from the first showing to closing day.
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Hi, I make printable maths resources, this one is a fractions pack, 12 activities as a pdf with cut out fraction strips, covers equal parts, equivalent fractions, comparing. For parents doing maths at home with 8-10 year olds, you need a printer and scissors basically. You download it straight away. Each activity has a...
**Subject:** Tuesday, 3:45pm: fractions, scissors, 20 minutes **Preheader:** 12 printable activities with cut-out fraction strips, worked examples and answer keys. Print two pages, find the scissors, and you've got a 20-minute fractions session for after school. The pack is 12 activities in one PDF, downloaded the mo...
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Sales email brief. Crypto tax reporting tool, first release to our waitlist. Product: a web app that imports transaction history from exchanges and wallets, reconciles transfers between your own wallets, and produces a capital gains report for your accountant. Read-only throughout, never holds funds. Audience: waitli...
**Subject:** Your waitlist spot is open: [launch price] instead of $149 **Preheader:** Import from every exchange and wallet, reconcile your own transfers, hand your accountant the report. Hi {first name}, You're on the waitlist, so you get in first, at [launch price] instead of the regular $149 per tax year. Last ...
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here are the google ads we're running now for our expense tracker and they're doing nothing. it's browser based, manual entry, CSV import, custom categories, monthly PDF summary. $6/month, no setup fee, cancel anytime. for solo freelance designers. H1: Freelance Expense Tracker H2: Simple Income Tracking Software H3: ...
H1: Freelance Expense Tracker H2: Simple Income Tracking, $6/Mo H3: Cancel Anytime. No Setup Fee D1: Log expenses, import CSVs, get a PDF summary monthly. $6/month. Start now, cancel anytime. D2: Made for solo freelance designers. Your own categories, in the browser. No setup fee. Join
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we're a 5 person creative agency in Richmond VA, branding and websites for restaurants and breweries. want a page on our site for our "brand in a month" package: logo + 2 alternates, colours and fonts, one page brand guide, menu and instagram templates, 4 weeks, 2 rounds of revisions. august was dead, we need something...
# A full restaurant or brewery brand in 4 weeks. Buy it. Don't pitch for it. Logo plus two alternates, colours, fonts, a one-page brand guide, menu and Instagram templates. Two rounds of revisions. Done in a month, from a five-person studio in Richmond, VA. **[Buy Brand in a Month]** Fixed scope, fixed timeline, two ...
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ok so we make scheduling software for small gyms and studios, class booking, waitlists, memberships, the whole thing. need google ads. people searching are solution aware, no need to explain what it is. $79/month per location, 14 day free trial. give me like 5 headlines and a couple descriptions, and dont say we're the...
### Headlines - Class Booking + Waitlists - $79/Month per Location - Try It Free for 14 Days - Bookings, Waitlists, Members - Built for Small Gyms & Studios ### Descriptions - Class booking, waitlists and memberships for small gyms and studios. $79/month per site. - Classes, waitlists and memberships in one place. $79...
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hey, i run 2 cabins in the Smokies near Gatlinburg, direct bookings on our site are way better for us than the big platforms. want a facebook ad for fall leaf season, october weekends are gone but weekdays are wide open. sleep 4, hot tub. $189/night midweek, 2 night minimum. mostly couples from Nashville/Atlanta/Knoxvi...
**Primary text** October weekends in the Smokies are gone. The weekdays are wide open. Two nights in a cabin near Gatlinburg, hot tub, leaf season out the window, $378 all up ($189/night, 2-night minimum). Sleeps 4, so bring the other couple or don't. An easy drive from Nashville, Atlanta or Knoxville. Book direct on...
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Landing page hero for our Seminar in School Leadership. Programme: nine-month online programme for serving school leaders in India. Weekly live small-group seminars, monthly one-to-one coaching, and a supervised school-improvement project carried out in the participant's own school. Cohort capped at 16. Expected workl...
# A leadership coach on your school-improvement project, one to one, every month for nine months. For vice principals and academic coordinators at CBSE/ICSE schools who have sat through recorded lectures and got no feedback. Nine months online, cohort of 16, around 5 hours a week, built around a supervised project in ...
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no thats too long. 3-4 lines, keep the $6/month and csv import, still shouldnt sound like it syncs with the bank. end with link in bio, link not decided
Budget app, $6/month, no bank login. Download the CSV from your bank, import it, done. Your transactions never leave your hands. Link in bio. — Note: I don't have the earlier draft, so this is rebuilt from what's in your message.
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I started a plant care subscription last year, $24 a month, you get a care guide and pre measured plant food for up to 6 houseplants. want to run google ads for it. theres no actual plants in the box btw so the ad cant make it sound like they get plants, we already had 3 refunds. just give me some headlines and descrip...
### Headlines - Plant Care Subscription $24/Mo - Plant Food & Guide, Monthly - For Plants You Already Own - Feeds Up to 6 Houseplants - $4 Per Plant Per Month - Pre-Measured Plant Food - Know Exactly How Much to Feed - Stop Guessing With Plant Food - A Care Guide Every Month - Plants Not Included - Subscribe for $24 a ...
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Hello, our homepage top is not converting good. Budgeting app from Manila, you put your salary into envelopes and it tells you how much is safe to spend today. Free with ads, Pro ₱99/month. Please make it more simple and strong. Current: Take Control of Your Financial Future Today Our innovative envelope-based budgeti...
# Salary in. Envelopes filled. Here's what's safe to spend today. Put your pay into envelopes for rent, food, bills and the rest. Every day the app tells you one number: what you can spend without touching them. **[Start free]** Free with ads. Pro is ₱99/month if you want it later. Around 800 people already budget t...
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Linkedin post about our partner succession review. 6 weeks, partner interviews, a 12 month handover roadmap
A partner is retiring. Who takes the clients, and when does the handover actually start? Most firms answer that in the last six months, under pressure. Our partner succession review answers it in six weeks. We interview the partners, then hand you a 12-month handover roadmap: what moves, to whom, and in what order, s...
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Sales email for a small SAT tutoring company in Northern Virginia. We're emailing parents of current juniors who attended one of our free 'SAT roadmap' webinars in August or September but haven't enrolled. Roughly 220 contacts. The offer is our 12-week small-group program (max 4 students) for the March SAT: two 90-min...
**Subject:** Enroll by Oct 15 and the $150 diagnostic is included **Alternate 1:** Priya here: the March SAT group, and an October 15 deadline **Alternate 2:** Tuesday/Thursday fills first. Here's why. **Preheader:** 24 sessions, 3 practice tests, max 4 students. Deadline Oct 15 for the free diagnostic. Hi [first nam...
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Hero for our dev platform. It spins up an isolated preview environment per pull request, seeds it with test data, tears it down when the PR closes, runs in the customer's own cloud. Buyer is the platform engineering lead at a 100–500 dev company maintaining homegrown scripts that do this badly. Need headline, supportin...
## Every PR gets an environment. You stop maintaining the script that does it. Isolated preview environment per pull request, seeded with test data, torn down when the PR closes. Runs in your own cloud account, not ours. - Open a PR, get an environment with test data already loaded. Reviewers test against a running e...
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ok too generic. the warehouse temp staffing google ads, 5 more headlines, less corporate
- Short-Staffed This Week? - Need Pickers By Monday? - Trucks In. Not Enough Hands. - Extra Hands For Peak Season - Cover The Shift. Ship On Time. — Note: I don't have the earlier draft, so this is rebuilt from what's in your message.
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Brief for a paid Instagram/Facebook ad. Client is a small language school in Berlin running online German courses for working expats. Product: 8-week evening course, A1 to B1, two live 90-minute sessions per week in groups of max 8, native-speaker teachers, recordings available afterwards. Offer: €390 for the 8 weeks...
### Primary text 1 — under 100 words €340 instead of €390 if you book the October course before 20 September. That's 16 live evening sessions, 90 minutes each, in a group of no more than 8, with a native-speaker teacher who has heard every possible way to get der, die and das wrong. Miss one? It's recorded. A1 to B1...
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Email about our online fractions course, 4 weeks. AED 880 or maybe a launch discount, havent decided
**Subject:** Four weeks on fractions. Only fractions. **Preheader:** Online, AED 880 for the whole course, which is AED 220 a week. Half of a third. Why dividing by a fraction makes the number bigger. Fractions are the point where maths stops feeling obvious, and most courses give them one chapter and move on. This o...
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Ok so background. I run a small math tutoring place in the suburbs outside Chicago, me and three part time tutors (mostly college students). We do middle school and high school math, mostly algebra/geometry, some SAT prep. Every September I send an email to families who've used us before and its always the same 'welcom...
Subject: Math this fall: $40 groups of three (new) Preheader: One-on-one is still $70. Reply with grade + days and I'll hold a spot. Hi [parent first name], Quick one, since it's the first weeks of school and I know you're getting these from everyone. Two things are new at [center name] this year: 1. Small groups ...
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so, the 8 week ops engagement we sell to engineering consultancies - 4 of us in Singapore, need a page for it. up to 12 staff interviews, we review handoffs and resourcing, 3 remote leadership workshops, then an operating playbook with a 90 day rollout plan. they implement, we dont. NDA before kickoff. CTA is book a 30...
# 8 weeks. Up to 12 staff interviews. One operating playbook your team rolls out in 90 days. An operations engagement for engineering consultancies where projects stall in the handoffs and resourcing is decided by whoever shouts first. We find where it breaks, then hand you a plan to fix it. **Book a 30-minute fit ca...
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Meta ad for a product launch, cold traffic, EU-wide targeting (mostly DE, NL, AT). Product is a hand balm in a twist-up stick, 12 g, fragrance free, you rub it straight onto knuckles and dry patches, no greasy fingers, fits in a coat pocket. €4.50 per stick. Audience angle: people who already carry hand cream but hate ...
### Primary text 1 — under 125 characters Love hand cream. Hate the tube? Twist, swipe on the knuckles, pocket it. No greasy fingers. €4.50. ### Primary text 2 The tube leaked in your bag again. This one can't. 12 g of fragrance-free hand balm in a twist-up stick. Swipe it straight onto knuckles and dry patches on th...
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need an email to my list, I'm a career coach for moms going back to work after a few years out. Offering a 6 week 1:1 program, weekly calls plus I redo your resume and linkedin. Launching for the new year. My list is mostly women who downloaded my free resume gap guide. Goal is 8 spots. Don't call them "stay at home mo...
**Subject:** 8 spots for a new-year return to work **Preheader:** 6 weeks of 1:1 calls, plus your resume and LinkedIn rewritten by me. You downloaded my resume gap guide, so I'll skip the pep talk. The hard part isn't explaining the time away. It's getting a resume, a LinkedIn profile and an interview answer that all ...
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My cofounder wrote this launch email and it's too long, and finance hasn't approved the discount yet. Can you tighten it and handle the discount bit without inventing numbers? Product is 13-week cash flow forecasting for consulting firms, upload bank CSV + open invoices, compare a base case with two scenarios. Going to...
**Subject:** Your 13-week cash forecast, without the last-week-of-the-month spreadsheet **Preheader:** Bank CSV + open invoices in. Base case and two scenarios out. Launch discount for the first [N]. Hi {first name}, Last week of the month, and the forecast spreadsheet is fighting back again. Upload your bank transa...
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Meta ad, cold traffic, for a steel balcony planter. Powder-coated steel, raised stand, removable planting tub, slide-out drip tray, terracotta-ish color. $89 with the stand, delivery extra. Target: apartment renters 25–40 in dense cities with a balcony they don't use. Budget $40/day for two weeks. Angle is 'one corner ...
### Primary text — short 1. The balcony you never use is missing one thing: a corner worth sitting in. Steel planter on a stand, $89. 2. Can't drill, can't hang, can't paint. Can stand a planter in the corner. $89 with the stand. ### Primary text — longer 3. Your lease says no drilling, no hooks, no "modifications"...
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Here's the ad my cofounder wrote for our fractions practice site. Too long, sounds like a textbook. Can you turn it into an actual Facebook ad, primary text + headline? "Is your 4th grader struggling with fractions? Our online practice library provides hundreds of visual exercises. Every question comes with a step by ...
**Primary text** The free worksheets didn't stick. Not your kid's fault: a worksheet says "wrong." It doesn't say why. This does. Hundreds of visual fractions exercises for 4th graders, and every single question comes with a step-by-step explanation, so "I don't get it" finally has an answer. Launch price: $5. **Hea...
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Product page for our flower subscription, 2 deliveries a month, $280/month, cancel anytime
# Fresh flowers twice a month, without a trip to the florist. $280 a month, cancel anytime. Two deliveries a month, $140 a delivery. New flowers arrive before the last ones have had time to droop. **[Subscribe for $280/month]** Cancel anytime. ## What you get - **2 deliveries a month** - **$280 a month**, which is ...
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i run a little paper craft subscription, $3.50 a month and every month you get 4 printable projects. need the page where people subscribe rewritten, make the price really obvious and a big subscribe button
# 4 new printable paper craft projects every month. $3.50. Print them at home, make them at the kitchen table. Four projects a month, so there's always one waiting for a quiet afternoon. ## $3.50 a month Four printable projects. That's under $1 a project. # [Subscribe for $3.50/month](#subscribe)
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Hey need a facebook ad for my tutoring thing. I do math tutoring for middle and high schoolers, online over zoom, mostly algebra and geometry, some SAT prep. $55 an hour, first session half price. Its back to school time and thats always when people panic so want to run it the next 3 weeks. I taught at a public school ...
**Primary text** Algebra homework already turning into "I don't get it"? First session with me is $27.50 for a full hour. I taught math in a public school for 9 years. Now I tutor middle and high schoolers online over Zoom, mostly algebra and geometry, some SAT prep. Sessions are one on one, so we work on what your ...
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Launch post for our company LinkedIn page. Product: a client onboarding workspace for consulting firms — you drop in the signed SOW, it turns it into a task checklist, assigns owners, and tracks which client inputs are still missing. Target is ops leads at consulting firms, roughly 30–100 people. Problem: we haven't d...
### Version 1 — ~80 words The SOW is signed. Now someone in ops has to turn it into a plan and chase the client for everything they still owe you. We built a client onboarding workspace that does the first part: drop in the signed SOW and it becomes a task checklist with an owner on every task and a running list of w...
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For my client — a career coach in Amsterdam who works with internationals who relocated for a partner's job and are trying to restart their own career in the Netherlands. Deliverable: the hero section of her new website. - The service: 1:1 coaching programme, 6 sessions over 3 months, online or in person in Amsterdam ...
### Headline option 1 — Frustration **Moved for their job. Applications for yours going nowhere?** ### Headline option 2 — Outcome **Restart your career in the Netherlands. In English.** ### Subheadline Six 1:1 sessions over three months, online or in Amsterdam Zuid, for internationals who were mid-career at home and...
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homepage headline, cleaning company Fort Collins, $185 deep cleans
# Your Fort Collins home, deep cleaned. $185.
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Here's the Google ad we've been running for our greens powder for 6 weeks. CTR is 0.9% and I'm told that's bad. Rewrite it — 10 headlines, 4 descriptions. Headline 1: Premium Greens Powder Headline 2: 30 Servings Per Tub Headline 3: Order Today Description 1: Our greens powder contains 21 fruits and vegetables in ever...
### Headlines 1. Lemon-Mint Greens Powder 2. 21 Fruits & Veggies Per Scoop 3. $44 a Tub, 30 Servings 4. No Artificial Sweeteners 5. Mixes Easily in Plain Water 6. Made in the US 7. Subscribe: $37.40 a Tub 8. Free Shipping Over $50 9. Greens That Taste Like Lemon 10. Order Your Tub Today ### Descriptions 1. 21 fruits &...